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Sunday, September 12, 2021

Kate's Adventure

 Recently we had a sentence starter to start our writing. We then had to carry on the story. It was on a girl named Kate.

Here is my story on Kate's adventure:

Since she was young, Kate had known she was different to normal people. It was only now though that her true powers were beginning to be realised. She was becoming the person she was born to be. It was her destiny...to become normal. She had been taken from her bed in a small town from a rather unusual thing, nothing other than an alien. She was now traveling to a place she and not many other people had been before - outer space! She had been thrown into a spaceship at exactly midnight on a cold, miserable night in California. She was trembling with fear and coldness, frightened that she would never ever see her family again. The alien was in the front compartment of the spaceship swerving from side to side. 


“I need to get back to my family!” Kate said, “Well, we’re here now!” said the alien. “We’re not going back until my job is done, which is to fix you!”. Kate was now crying and screaming, but deep inside of her mind she was actually wondering what could happen if the alien fixed her brain. Kate had a disease in her brain called Neurodegenerative disease which causes your brain nerves to deteriorate over time, it can change your personality and can cause confusion. It can also destroy your brain’s tissue and nerves. Kate had only just been diagnosed with the disease, so her brain hadn’t been destroyed. The alien  could possibly change her life forever and she would finally be like a normal person. The spaceship landed in a hurry bouncing off wherever they were. The alien came out of the front compartment and grabbed Kate by her t-shirt and hauled her into this building that was completely white and plain.


The alien threw Kate into a funny shaped machine that was shaped like a cylinder, it looked like it had been transformed from a hot water cylinder into a machine that could possibly change everything in Kate's life. Kate sat down on the provided seat that was in the machine, it was a bit tacky but Kate thought, if this is going to change my life I will sit there. She could hear the alien talking to someone, but she couldn’t understand the language. Then she heard buttons going “beep, bop, boop!”. Then all Kate could see was her going round and round in circles like a tornado, it was getting faster and faster and Kate was starting to feel dizzier and dizzier. It was starting to work, Kate started to feel better. The tornado finally stopped and the door of the machine opened. Kate was finally normal. The alien grabbed her t-shirt again and dragged her back to the spaceship.

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